Book review: “Spin the Dawn” (The Blood of the Stars #1) by Elizabeth Lim

Number of stars: 2 of 5

Genre: Fantasy, YA, Magic, Romance, Asian Literature

Edition: Hardcover

Synopsis taken from book jacket:

A gifted tailor in disguise. Three legendary dresses. The competition of a lifetime.

On the fringes of the Great Spice Road Maia Tamarin works as a seamstress in the shop of her father, once a tailor of renown. She dreams of becoming the greatest tailor in the land, but as a girl, the best she can hope for is to marry well. When a royal messenger summons her ailing father to court, Maia poses as his son and travels to the Summer Palace in his place. She knows her life is forfeit if her secret is discovered, but she’ll take that risk to save her family from ruin and achieve her dream of becoming the imperial tailor. There’s just one catch: Maia is one of twelve tailors vying for the job.


The competition is cutthroat, and Maia’s job is further complicated by the unwelcome attention of the court enchanter, Edan, who seems to see straight through her disguise.

But nothing could have prepared her for the final challenge: to sew three gowns so dangerously beautiful, it will take a quest to the ends of the earth to complete them.

My review:

I don’t know about everyone else, but often times when a publisher plugs a book as “X meets X” from pop culture such as “Spin the Dawn” being advertised as “Project Runway meets Mulan” I immediately go into the first chapter skeptical. There’s me reading with a monocle and furrowed brow peering at the pages with my most critical eye like “Riiiiiiiiiiiiiight, publisher. Allow me to prove you wrong.”

However, the good news was that this book WAS very much like the love child of Project Runway and Mulan! In both the best and worst ways. Fashion, stubborn protagonist, old fathers, demanding emperors, and drama included.

Now the bad news. I waffled between giving this book 2 or 3 stars. The first portion was amazing! Totally gobbled it up. All about the Imperial tailor competition and how our protagonist Maia overcame and made gorgeous clothing despite the high stakes, secrets, palace drama and other tailors bullying her.
There was even a nod to Heidi Klum and Tim Gunn’s “unconventional materials” challenge which had me snickering, in which Maia persevered by making a pair of slippers out of hammered glass shards.

But that 2nd half. Sheesh. It started going downhill in Part 2, or Chapter 17. Maia has to go on a D&D type quest to retrieve rare materials and of course I could see it coming from a mile away that she’d fall in love with her travel companion, tall dark and wizardly Enchanter Eden along the way. No surprises there. There’s the first eye roll.
Second eye roll: I’m all for character arcs, but ouch, why did Maia’s have to take such a severe nose dive? Suddenly our protagonist goes from being a fierce girl trying to survive in a man’s world to barely being able to do anything or save herself without her man Eden saving her. She begins to make one too-stupid-to-live decision after another until I began to gag. Seriously! I wish I could be more kind, but it’s absolutely true. Ghosts and demons chasing her? Eden says “don’t look at them? Don’t touch them?” What does Maia do? Looks at them and touches them. (Smack my head).
Third eye roll. The book ended on a pile of lies. I’m just over it. Maia makes some deals with goddesses and demons and then decides to lie to the man she supposedly loves about it so that he’ll leave on yet another D&D quest without her and think that everything’s fine. WTF? Why do authors pull that s***? That is like my most hated trope. When characters lie to each other under the “guise” of love to advance and complicate the plot.

I don’t know if I want to read the next book at this point. Thanks for listening!

Rly

Book review: “The Very Secret Society of Irregular Witches” by Sangu Mandanna

Number of Stars: 3 of 5

Genre: Fantasy, Whimsy, Magic, Romance

Edition: Ebook

Synopsis taken from author’s website:

A warm and uplifting novel about an isolated witch whose opportunity to embrace a quirky new family—and a new love—changes the course of her life.

As one of the few witches in Britain, Mika Moon knows she has to hide her magic, keep her head down, and stay away from other witches so their powers don’t mingle and draw attention. And as an orphan who lost her parents at a young age and was raised by strangers, she’s used to being alone and she follows the rules… with one exception: an online account, where she posts videos “pretending” to be a witch. She thinks no one will take it seriously.

But someone does. An unexpected message arrives, begging her to travel to the remote and mysterious Nowhere House to teach three young witches how to control their magic. It breaks all of the rules, but Mika goes anyway, and is immediately tangled up in the lives and secrets of not only her three charges, but also an absent archaeologist, a retired actor, two long-suffering caretakers, and… Jamie. The handsome and prickly librarian of Nowhere House would do anything to protect the children, and as far as he’s concerned, a stranger like Mika is a threat. An irritatingly appealing threat.

As Mika begins to find her place at Nowhere House, the thought of belonging somewhere begins to feel like a real possibility. But magic isn’t the only danger in the world, and Mika will need to decide whether to risk everything to protect a found family she didn’t know she was looking for…

My review:

I’ve got to say I love the author’s writing style, humor, and voice. She had me smiling, I could picture each scene and how the characters looked and acted.


However, this review may have been a solid 4 stars of enjoyment for me, if it wasn’t for the ending. After such a meandering, pleasant story, that ending was rushed and very flat. I didn’t like how Mika basically strong-armed the other witches into seeing things her way. Wasn’t tidy at all, or believable.


It read like a forced HEA for me personally.

Happy reading!

Rlygirl

Book review: “Bright Ruined Things” by Samantha Cohoe

Number of Stars: 2 out of 5

Genre: YA, Fantasy, Mystery

Edition: Hardcover

I almost did not finish this book at the halfway mark.

And it may be a “it’s not you, it’s me” thing, but I’m coming off of last year’s disappointing read of “Beta“, another YA book about a young, beautiful but naive girl who discovers things in her glamorous life might not be all they seem. This combined with the slooooooooooow plot pace nearly had me putting the book down.

I am glad I finished it though and got to know what dark and horrible magics and family members the rich Prosper family surrounded themselves with. The very last paragraph of the book made me smile too! I do think the author wrapped up everything neatly, despite the ending being rather sad/reflective. Definitely no cliff-hangers though.

The cover is lovely!

Happy reading,

Rlygirl